I’d love a bubble, yes I would
I’d live inside it if I could
I’d drift through life, safe inside
For all to see, nothing to hide.
My special bubble would be airtight
To let nothing in but beautiful light
The whole spectrum of colours bright
Floating along, what a wonderful sight.
This bubble of mine would be safe and sound
Hovering high above the ground
It’d be the most splendiferous way
gliding free, throughout the days.
I’d make bubbles for me and mine
And so that way we’d all be fine
Buoyant, happy, with no troubles
Unless someone dare pop those bubbles.
To protect my bubbles would be my aim
So inside they’d feel no pain
But we would not be able to touch
Hugs and kisses I love so much.
On second thoughts I don’t think I care
I much prefer the love we share
I’d be lonely in my bubble for one
Being carried away towards the sun.
It might be fun for one single day
To have our cares just blown away
To live a life worry and carefree
I’d loveabubble for you and me.
© 2013 Kelly Hibbert, all rights reserved.
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Normally not a fan of poems, but this one is really good. Probably took you days to write, or would that just be me?
Do you prefer poetry to poems or neither?
Hours, yes. Days, no. I don’t have that kind of time to post. Rhyming is easy for me. Probably comes from reading so much children’s literature.
Thanks for reading and the compliment even though it’s not your cup of tea.
Maybe not liking is a strong expression, I just prefer writing and reading stories. But great writing is great writing doesn’t matter in what form it arrives in.
Keep it up.
Love.
Love?
Love the poem. Not trying to interpret any meaning. lol.
I love this. It has such a fun rhyme I just want to keep reading it out loud 🙂
Thanks, Ionia.
I enjoyed writing it and the word loveabubble is pretty funny out loud!
That really is a fun word lol
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Thank you! You are too kind. I will pass on soon.
Reblogged this on sueshan123.
this is precious – you are a wonderful poet! i love the words, the rhyme, the meaning – the whole package – it is perfect!
I’d love to just graciously accept your comment but I would have difficulty doing that. Perfect is something I strive for but my attempts are fruitless. Perfection is an illusion, I think. Something that is unattainable yet something I still drive myself to achieve.
I don’t mean to belittle you or your compliment. Please know that.
I agree completely. I realize the word perfect is used a bit loosely, but sometimes I find it the best word to use – for lack of another that I am unable to think of at a particular time or sometimes ‘it’ is perfect for me at the particular moment I read it.
I truly understand what you mean. To me, perfection is only something I can strive for – whether it is attained or not god only knows. But I will at least try and do my best to have fun while trying. And if I flub it up, well, hopefully I had fun flubbing!!
Flubbing! Too cool for school. 😉
Hah! That sounds so 50’s- early 60’s – the Pink Ladies from Grease. Like “we are cruisin’ for a bruisin’!”